The light sabors ruined it lol.
I'm just really getting sick of all the star wars stuff. It would have been better if you just stuck with the circle thing, but suddenly i see 2 light sabors and it wrecked the experience lol (I don't give a hell if I spelled light sabors wrong, you star wars geeks have to learn to grow up)
I feel really bad that Mr. Kingoftheportal dis liked my submission. And why do you constantly put lol? You laugh out loud a little too much. If you don't like the flash, try to leave a constructive review, not something you pulled out of your ass.
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Your only good idea for this movie was to use the no tween philosiphy.
what u need is a plot or perhaps more than just dots cricling around the screen then exploding. u need color and smoother transitions. length is not always important but smoothness and substance can create a good effect in a smaller portion. good try but your work must be refined and show more intricacy and substance.
Thank's for the constructive review. This piece was more of an expierement with a different style of animation.
hmm.
that was very interesting. i loved the music.
mind appealing i should say.
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed my submission.
Suggestions
I have to be honest, I really wasn't that impressed with your frame-by-frame animation. First off, the music was much too repetitive and bland, I would suggest using a more "spicey" song. Also, I didn't really find that the animations moved well to the beat or feel of the music. Overall, I think there is potential in your work, but you must put a little more thought into what you make. Good work and good luck with future projects!
Thanks for the constructive critism, if you have any suggestions for songs please email them to me at projectsigma4@hotmail.com.
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ok well i got some things to say, why submit something that has been done and outdone by SO many ppl and then try to cover it by saying that its a 2000 frame animation...Dude the only reason you submitted this is because you havent learned the pleasures of animation....Your probably gonna say that i have no flash, well i dont, im learning flash right now, im more audio than flash so i dont care.. Second the music wasnt excellent, it was a Repetative overused melody that wasnt even harmonzied with the rest...Dont get me wrong, he has potential and so do you...
All im saying is dont glorify over what you dont have.
With all respect, i hope you continue before for you to have the patience to do that, im sure you will have the patience to learn how to correctly or, more effectively use flash, i hope to see more, interesting submissions.
Nicolas...
Thank you for your input and I am glad to hear you are learning flash. I hate hypocritical people who blam without even trying flash. It was only in my opinion that the music was excellent, I don't personally know the artist who produced the music and I selected it from the audio portal. And btw I submitted this because I was expierementing with a whole new form and style of animation, I know all about the "pleasures of animation", not to say I am particularly good at animation... I'm only learning.