that was fast
good work on changing the ending, put's the whole thing in a different light :) also you were fast on changing it, well done. the writing passes a bit fast, but it's ok. it could be longer, but it's good enough, keep them comming!
Reviews for "THEND (better ending)"
jamesthebumtickler responds:
thanks alot yeah i dint want ppl thinking it was a heap of crap and obviousley everyone didnt thanks alot for the score
Great music, but the story doesn't go anywhere
Music and animation go well together - same feeling of fatalism, very atmospheric. But the storyline needs work - the end is revealed half-way through. Try to build up tension - for instance, show police later. Or maybe a shot or two of family and neighbours panicking to contrast with hero's calm. Good start.
jamesthebumtickler responds:
thanks
very nice style indeed
I really enjoyed the style of this movie...alot of emotion is portrayed through the short bursts of scenes & the dilogue!! I really enjoyed this....
jamesthebumtickler responds:
yeah currently goin through a hard time at the moment and as bad as it maybe its really helping with flash
i liked the music
where did you get that music from
btw the movie was alright
jamesthebumtickler responds:
bloc party- skeleton go to www.blocparty.net and go to media and mp3 youll get it there thx for score
edit your movies, dont resubmit em
i blue the whistle on you, sorry but you need to click on edit my portal submissions.
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