Well
First of all, pal, you need a loading screen. We poor dial-up users depend on those things so we don't have to watch a freezy version of it.
I liked the idea, the blood, and the drama with the squirrel, but you should have made the stick figure into a lumber jack BEFORE you submitted it.
I'm not sure how you would put it into a series, but good luck with that.
alright, liked the end
imo i think that this was ok it could of been better if u made the characters talk or somen, or u could of showed who shot the squirrel at the end, like some other forest animal
Good but..
My opinion, if you want more points dont use sticks. And if you do use sticks, make then thicker, like size 8 or 9. Nice Ending too, and nice sounds. This seems like your first flash so i wont be too hard, but, for a first, it was pretty neat. I hope to see more Of your work soon!
~RustedHalo
((( FUNNY )))
This was funny and to have a stick there cutting the tree was perfect but tobad the squrl had to die, it might have been better if it was the other way around hehe, funny flash though so notbad, maybe make another version with the stick dying though, anyways nice job...
~X~
Dont get too down about it
actually, i think it just might make it, keep working on this stuff, because for a newer animator, you are showing a LOT of style and talent, the production was very good, but the graphics, audio, and plot need a lot more work to be great.