Not bad. Pretty good, actually.
The sound is clear and you can easily distinct it between parts of the beat, as well as it has its own input from the creator. However, to me, some parts sound a little...."ragged" or "rough" so to speak. But that may probably be because this was made more to be like the BGM version, and not the remastered, which has the rougher sound.
Either way, you put good effort into this, and so I give it this ruling:
8/10
4/5