not as good as the first but still................
i liked both of these and i am sorry for your loss.............but i still think that overall you deserved a 9 but i gave you 1 point for the effort and to me all that counts is that you like it. i really hope that you are not being hurt or messed with by your father. believe me if i could i would he;p you...
hope you get through this loss (not meaning that i hope u forget your brother) but i do want you to be ok because you seem like a nice person
by the way i seen that jeff was 14 and odd enough i just turned 14 on that month and me name is jeff to.