that was awesome
it was cool how you showed the days before certain disasters to show the bliss that was ruined
it was:
1. 9/11
2. some huge train crash in europe
3. the tsunami thing
right?
anyways AWESOME graphics and just overall very good
Reviews for "Fragile Machine: Oread"
Omg...:'(
Great movie, awsome 3d renders, great music, voice acting etc...
WHY DID THIS SCORE ONLY 3.78?!!?!
HURRY UP TOM! FRONTPAGE!
4/5
fantastic, though not perfect
The graphics are so insanely awesome. Stupendous even! The background music fits in very well. Unfortunately, compared to these, the voice acting is somewhat lacking. It's a matter of diction (or enunciation... same thing really) and conveying the feelings that you want through the way the words are said. In this case, the diction is not that good and the words are spoken rather monotonously. When the words themselves hold so much impact, the way they are spoken needs to have at least part of that too. Though it should still be spoken quietly, at a slow rythm, it needs more energy. Pain is energy. It takes energy to hold it in, to keep it from showing.
On the diction part, think of it this way: when Shakira sings, you can hear the accent but it doesn't diminish the pronunciation. I mean, "ain't" isn't a word (not that you say "ain't" but do you understand what I mean?). When the girls from T.A.T.U. sing that song by the Smiths they keep a cetain amount of their accent but they get rid of much of it and they keep the words sharp. This should be the same here as well, especially considering the topic.
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this is me trying to give constructive critisism. sorry if I sound pompous or like an arse.
wow
The animation was amazing!! i havent seen something like this before, it was so neat!!!!it was sad which is obviously what you were aiming for,how you did the scenes was really neat! my fave was the beach ball part and the one where you made it look like the picture was bunring by acid or something, fading away, the smilez staying behind was kinda erie, but kool.. good job, I would watch the next one
Love How CGI Movies Are Coming To Newgrounds
Obviously a step into the future and a cooler and better way to tell stories other then animated cartoons. This is a really cool piece and I hope it gets better in the future. One problem however, was that it was a little short. The voice acting was great though and I could see that a lot of work was put into this. CGI is great when the whole movie is CGI, the only problem nowadays is that movies use too much CGI in live action movies and people who make prosthetics and things like that are losing their jobs. When CGI is use to make an entire movie like this and Toy Story for example, it is a great use to the movie and the art form.