It was ok
The story is ok, but you need to work on the animation in your fight scenes. Stop using flare so much.
Reviews for "FF:The New Empire Part 3"
Tootbook responds:
but...but....FLARE!
hmmm
its ok...i think
3/5
for u (make the tekst i bit more BIG nex time hard to read when ur sleepy lol )
Tootbook responds:
lol alright
Just to warn you I am not a FF fan...
It was a good story with a good dialogue, but I was jsut lsot since I don't follor FF or anything, otherwise, it was not bad, honestly. I guess the sprite style was the most effeicient for it? Just a suggestion, I have never seen a FF flash that's not in sprite, so maybe try that and see what happens, or odn't, it's jsut my opinion. Anywya, I hope to see mroe submissions by you. X )
Tootbook responds:
Alright, i'll try, but my artistic talents have dropped since i've taken the time to learn flash..i wont start drawing till new empire 7 or 8 more than likely 8. Thanks for the review man.
That was... fine
All I gotta say.
Tootbook responds:
my body is sexy..
all i gotta say.
This just didn't cut it....
Sorry, this one just didn't cut it for me. It had the worst spelling and grammar yet. That's something you REALLY need to fix, dude. It can be hard (or if not, painful) to read it with such poor grammar and spelling. Also,
*SPOILERS*
Wedge's death? I barely saw it. It was just a flash. It could have been done much better, sorry. You should have included a different song for his death, like maybe Aeris' Theme or something. In addition, even if the spelling and grammar had been fixed up, it doesn't fix the sub-par dialogue and vapid story. I'm sorry, but your first two were considerably better. I am hoping that the next chapters will be much better than this one. I'm really sorry to be so mean, but don't worry--You still have many chances to redeem yourself.
Tootbook responds:
I rushed thru this movie in one day...so thats why its pretty bad. But OH well :D! lol thanks for the review man, and i'm glad you liked 1-2 better!