Well, it needs something, but I'm not sure what.
I can't quite put my finger on it, but something is wrong with this flash, it's not the graphics, they're good, it's not as stylish as it could be- that needs improvement. And dispite the fact that the music didn't fit at all, I don't think that's it eather... oh well!
Finix #1, out!
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nice graphs and sound..
Not much to say...
I saw the start or "Teaser" as some ppl like to call it a jew weeks ago and it lookked promissing.
About the movie: I also enjoyed watching 'part I' , nice details and everything looked OK. It was worth the time...
Good Luck!
HHYB- Jagermeister
thanks for watching
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it's not bad, but i realy got bored watching it.. you should work on your suspence. Change music, get rid of some scene's.. just make it shorter and better. I think still too many people on newgrounds automaticaly vote high if a movie takes longer than 2 minutes, and if the graphics and the sound is good.. But hey, i still believe a movie should tell a story. And this one did.. but you could have told the story a lot faster, whit the same music, and no-one would get bored. Just a tip
thanks for the tip.:)
bleh
lol why was the stock ON the guys shoulder? and the scope was touching his eye...if someone actually did that with an awp and shot it...he would prolly die. GEEZ GET WITH IT!!! the rest was entertaining...the beginning drags like hell.
sorry with the AWP, I'll fix it soon