Not bad
I didn't know Zelda was a fuzz-bumper
Reviews for "Links tale : Genesis"
Rather uninteresting....
The voiceover in this was rather shabby, especially when Link is flung into the air. If you're going to yell, make it gut-wrenching. I want to jump out of my chair in horror because Link's life is flashing in front of his eyes. The dialogue between Link, the fairy, and that other chick was incredibly uninteresting.... At least I didn't give it a 0/5.... In fact I was quite merciful with my 2/5.... Have a nice day. You mispelled Genesis now that I think about it.... END!
Yep..
Rather than just give you my two cents, bitch about your movie and tell you what to do, I wanna give you some pointers.
You should definitely have some better dialogue, I chuckled a tiny bit about the lesbian bit, but that's it. I've had some experience with scripting a sprite movie, (Super Smash All stars, Final Fantasy Sonic X) and if you're interested, you can contact me via Instant messenger for some script.
Your characters walk slow, and the guars moved rather.. sluggish. Link's voice should be more authentic.. like, let's say, maybe scottish? Or Irish? I mean, he wars all that green.. you'd think he'd be that way. Navi's voice should be better, no offense to the actor. Ah, but the voice actor for Mei Ling (Kagome was it?) Man.. she's real good. Keep her.
There's some serious potiential here, Metal Gear Zelda, heh. For some issues about the actionscripting and flash and all that, you oughta contact BDX via AIM (TAZJR4) and if you'd liek me to write, which I gladly will contact me via AIM (MajinTobias4474)
Good luck buddy. Nice first try.
The Sounds Sucked so hard i didnt want to listen
yeah really the sounds where just awful and that mgs codec wasnt made great ether but still it was very funny and you should work on these small errors and you will really make great flash!!!good luck in the future and keep gaming!!!!:P
It could have been worse I guess.
It was just so contrived; such unnatural dialogue. I know you came up with some jokes you thought were really funny and you wanted them in your movie but you need to work out whether or not anyone would actually say that in conversation, let alone repeat the same poor joke several times in a sentence. Also sound recording was very poor quality and almost impossible to hear, except for one word which comes out all too clear in it's loud squeaky horribleness "CRAP", as it were; comedy genius?
uiaad responds:
let me just let you into a little known fact here, the script was actualy written on a beer mat at about 2 in the monring and i never deviated from be because i had never expected put it up for public display why it end up on here was just to see peoples reactions. it was actualy made in about 2 weeks ( voices and all ) with no prior knowldge of flash or use of any tutorial. I can gladly say that im currently working on the sequal ...