Could be better
Not long enough. Also, you gave away the ending in the description. Not too bad though. Like I said, if it was longer (and had more of a story line) it could be pretty good. I give you 3/5
Reviews for "A Day in the Park"
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sweet, another flash where everyone is happy then a violent death shocks and awes eveyone watching. you must be proud to count yourself in the ever growing numbers of people that produce this crap.
American-Chinker responds:
Yeah, I know...it's almost as good as your flash...
Flash by AnonDescent:
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Not interesting......
This movie wasn't really interesting. It didn't have a plot, was only a few seconds long, and he just got ran over by a truck, and that is not that interesting......
mmmmk.
lovely. compress ur audio.
American-Chinker responds:
I sure will next time, thanks
Compress the audio
wasn't too bad as a flash, but if you want to get anyhere, you have to make the flashes longer and keep the KB's small.