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Reviews for "Tommy's 1st day at school"

Incredible art! But your animation is lacking...

I always hate reviewing others works, because the work that goes into them and so on, but still...
Your art and style was great, it ranks up there very very high, but your animation is terrible. IT was all so slow, and with only the most basic movement, and did I say slow??
Great art, I really liked your style.

um kinda retarded

ok not a lil its retarded but cool i gave a 4 humor becous i want to burn the school to a crisp to but a nuculer explosion from a match : | wat u think u could have made a better flash if it mad any sence

Slooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooww

Very slow and boring but cool music...

jeneral-X responds:

like I said before... its slow on the slow motion scenes only... but on the rest its alright.. right? come on u guys i worked hard...

This be a title.

OK, big problems.
1. Too slow.
2. Not funny. At all.
3. No point whatsoever.
The rest was good though.

jeneral-X responds:

well... Thanks for scorin' it a five man... but the only reason its slow is that some scenes were in slow motion.... u cant have slow motion that goes fast...

uhh....ok too many problems....

this was ok, in that the graphics and animation were good. But everything else...im sorry, was horrendous. the story was so predictable, and none of it was in the least bit creative. oh wow, a young boy gets a match(where the heck did he get it??) and sets some kind of weird plushy chair on fire, and then you add that little atomic bomb clip. WTF? also , you made everything too slow, almost unbearable to even keep the eyes on the screen.
lets see...what else. the music was not right. the famous pink panther music...but really?? what did it have to do with the story?? you could have put in a track from metallica or the teletubbies, and it still wouldnt have changed the overall mood of the flash. so you need to word hard on your music choice. And also, you should have condensed the title of the flash, so it doesnt cut off, ex: "Tommy's first day at scho" <-----huh?? strange....
yeah, keep all i said in mind. how i would rate it out of stars....hmmm.... 1/5 for animation and effort.. Cheers!