uhh....ok too many problems....
this was ok, in that the graphics and animation were good. But everything else...im sorry, was horrendous. the story was so predictable, and none of it was in the least bit creative. oh wow, a young boy gets a match(where the heck did he get it??) and sets some kind of weird plushy chair on fire, and then you add that little atomic bomb clip. WTF? also , you made everything too slow, almost unbearable to even keep the eyes on the screen.
lets see...what else. the music was not right. the famous pink panther music...but really?? what did it have to do with the story?? you could have put in a track from metallica or the teletubbies, and it still wouldnt have changed the overall mood of the flash. so you need to word hard on your music choice. And also, you should have condensed the title of the flash, so it doesnt cut off, ex: "Tommy's first day at scho" <-----huh?? strange....
yeah, keep all i said in mind. how i would rate it out of stars....hmmm.... 1/5 for animation and effort.. Cheers!