Great job
da beat is pretty catchy and i like icecrean.
Reviews for "The Ice-Cream Rap"
FatKidWitAJetPak responds:
I LOVE ICECREAM
Like the song
great music skill man
FatKidWitAJetPak responds:
Lol thanks for liking the lyrics. :)
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It's way too easy to completely trash this "song" because it's a simple song about ice cream over a simple beat that got to the front page, so I'll try my hardest not to be prejudged or an ass while reviewing this "song". I'll start with the positive. The backbeat is actually good, and some of the lyrics are funny. That being said, the rest is subpar. No offense, but you're not "Weird Al", and most of the lyrics are ludicrous and fall far short of humorous, for a parody. The lyrics are delivered poorly and nasally at times, and the beatboxing was trashy. The music should have been blended along with your voice; it might have sounded better then. However, I give you 6 / 10 for making me chuckle.
I hope this isn't coming off as obnoxious or mean.
FatKidWitAJetPak responds:
Well jesus christ it was freeflow you cant expect it to be all that great. And of course im not weird al.. this is just that Newgrounds humor for yah made by a teenager.
But as long as you chuckled, i am just fine.
Needless to say...
Someone will probably make a flash that goes to this song. Pretty funny song, dude.
FatKidWitAJetPak responds:
I sure hope so. As long as it is funny, I am proud of it.
Yeah...
Keep going to the top 5.
FatKidWitAJetPak responds:
I will try lol. :)