You should stick 2 Poems
The Poem and now the flash Whats next the musical????
You should stick 2 Poems
The Poem and now the flash Whats next the musical????
Average
Well, both your poeting and flash skills aren't so high... But I liked the music. Keep on practising.
Spelling
Your spelling definitely needs improvement.
So does your grammer!
(the " first real good poem I hade ever wrote. ") OMG!!!