Alright lets see
I enjoyied it but its not like I have anything against yaoi. Anyway, as far as the graphic goes, that was really good for someone who had not much experence, ((ment it as a compalment, asuming this was one of your first few if not tell me)), also, I must agree the mic. did have feed back, but unlike most movies, I could hear the voices over the music...though this one didn't have music I had to mention that. for mouse drawing good work, not many people can do mouse art work well unless they had tons of practice. your animation was good, and ya. inprovements will come to you as you get more practices so don't worry about that. as that I gave you a 9 on your overall and for rate I'll give you a 3. Good luck with future projects.