I thought this wasn't great, but was good. What I really like is how there's a lot of detail put into all the little things. My favorite is probably that blue box. In fact, I thought this was a bit too detailed. If I zoom in, it seems a bit too big. I still appreciate this.
It's great that you portrayed such a slice of life story here. It seems like you have good character designs. I can't help but feel like I've seen them before, but I do think they're original characters. That reminds me, I'm starting my final class next week. The window's nice too.