It was.... ok...
look, I KNOW you can draw better than this. I mean, I know my drawings suck, but you have potential. Some of the poses were awkward... and the proportions were a little off in a couple of shots... But other than that it's a good flash.
The mouth movements really didn't match up with the sound in a couple of places, and a lack of animation brought me out of the experience. Remember, we monkeys twitch alot, and your characters took too long to move, or minimal movements were too few and too short.
Don't be afraid to re-draw something. If I a line isn't right, re-draw it.
I know I am being very mean ( and please people, don't call me an ass wipe for thinking something is not perfect) but this flash bored me after the first couple of minutes.
I bet your next animation will be better! Good luck.
GKG