Really good, but still needs some improvement
Overall, it was an excellent submission. However, a few additions might be necessary. These may include the addition of some sound. Nothing fancy, you could make it look something like an old silent film (and add the grainy look). In this way, you could avoid using a whole lot of sound effects and just use some sort of music to portray the feeling you wish to convey. I think this approach would work rather well for this particular submission since there is really no need for any voice work. As for the animation, I am very impressed. This is probably one of the best animated movies on Newgrounds in a while.