Sound maybe?
Even the most beautiful animations can be worth nothing without sound. Seriously, this needed sound. It was great animation, stunning from Flash but it needed sound. It just looked stupid without sound. It would have been better even with simple background music without the effects but it needs sound. Plain and simple.
You're wrong about one thing...
Sound/music for this beautiful animation will not be simple to add in & may take up as much time as the animation did. I still enjoyed it even with 0 sound because the graphics were so good (even though the frame rate was indeed a tiny bit choppy when he's riding his bike... & I have a FAST computer). One thing that was both good & bad was the overly-cartoony way in which he pressed the button. It was funny, but nobody would ever press a button that way. Still, I'm guessing you weren't really going for realism. ;)
I'd say that for music this animation needs a specially composed orchestral-sounding score to correspond with the action on the screen, something to really give it atmosphere in some places & more drama in others. You know the animation "Bitey of Brackenwood"? If you go to the website of the creator, and go to the message board, there's a big group of composers there in one section (some of whom are very good) who may be willing to help you.
For sound I imagine you know much better than I do what it needs... a realistic rain sound, of course, but some cartoony sounds as well.
I do think that adding sound/music in would be worth it... for one thing, I think that if it had music/sound this flash would be rated in the top 10 right now. Adding sound really does make people like something a lot more (if the sound is good).
Great job, & good luck in your studies!
Wow.
That was great. A little laggy during the bikeriding part, like Yee said, but overall good. Violence is up al lthe way... well cause there wasn't much to put up all the way, so I thought I might as well. You should really make some more chicken related movies, you seem to like it :P.
Very good
This was a very well put together flash. I am curious about what grade you got on the project, and would like to compliment you on the rain effect. Keep em comming, and good work.
Awesome
man that was some sick shit. the whole thing was good except for the one part on the bike where it lags. i dont why, but no audio gives it that creepy feeling anyways. Thats just my opinion, but great job, keep makin more, or make a Fowl Injection 2 or something.