Ugg re-do
Another toon to make me sigh. I wish you would get someone to help on the drawing. If your going to take the time to do something, put the time into it to make it look nice.
Didnt watch the whole thing. I know what you were going for but too overdramatic to be funny.
Language not necessary.
Ugg do over.
Obiously your doing this for fun, but you need to put the care into it, even if its just a fun piece.