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THE GOOD
It was K. A well done sprite movie which you dont see that much anymore. It was pretty funny at some parts and you got some interactivity in the outakes part. Good sound to. Just thought I would point that out.
THE BAD
Well mario sprites are way overdone. And most of the outakes tried to hard to be funny. Also I could have used a little more length and a more well thought out story.
~Review Request Club~
well. . . .
This is a decent flash movie. The problem is that this has been done before. The plot of luigi getting revenge on his brother is quite old. If you want to use video game people, think of an original plot that takes at least 10 minutes to think up.
No thanks. I'll stick to my style.
Finally Luigi gets his revenge.
Haha, this actually turned out a lot better than I had expected after reading your summary. Although a relatively simple piece, it managed to be entertaining, funny, -and- cute. It didn't leave me feeling like it was too short or inadequate at the end, because you wrapped it up very nicely. The animation was crisp, and the sound was just fine. Also, I liked the theme that you explored with this (sibling rivalry). You have managed to cover all bases here. ;)
Light hearted and enjoyable, I can safely say that I hope to see more flash from you in the future.
Best fist try I've ever seen.
Even though you were only using sprits it turned out good. You went with somethin you knew you could make gold with. Funny but needs to be longer.
This was yor first flash
Wow.
<Good Points>
The sprite quality was great, the sound was themed correctly, good violence, and some humor. I also like the extra outtakes and the menu also.
<Improvement>
The only thing that I don't like about this flash is it's too short.
4/5 homer8722
Yes, one of the flaws I think I will always have as a flash artist is my lack of good length in flash movies. Although I do promise to work on this at the same time I think my flash style will always be a little short the way a lot of good flash "quickies" are. But rest asured this, as well with many other flaws I have/had, will be worked on.