I'm a christian, not a satinist.
Ok movie, bad morals. This probably wont appear to the christian audience well. Oh, and next time, when u make an army of people,
don't stick 100 movie clips seperatly into one scene! Just make the entire army one movieclip (or symbol) so that it doesnt lag.
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I didnt like your choice of song , the virus of life isnt a song about the devil and god at war, the meaning is completeley different from what you intended it to be, but you probably tried really hard on this, so i gave u a 3
respecatble, thank you for ur honest opinion
suprisingly good
I was suprised at how good it was. You mentioned it was your first flash, so my expectations weren't high, but I thought you did very well for your experience. The part where Satan was being banished to hell was downright good. It was extremely expressive and it set the tone very well. That said, I think it would have been improved if it had more of a point. Satan taking over heaven is all well and good, but it was just an armies clashing sort of thing. For this to really work you either need better action, or a better plot. I think you have real potential for either and just need to work at it and keep practicing.
Oh, and as far as the concept goes, I was a little bugged that Satan ended up winning. Not that I'm a serious Christian- quite the contrary. I just think it ended badly. For one, it would add to Satan's depressing wretched/downcast thing he had going on. It also makes it seem unklikely and insignificant that Satan was ever thrown down in the first place. Why didn't he whup God in the beginning?
I hope to see more of your work in the future.
Different
Well I've never seen a flah like that before. It wasn't that bad but you could work on it.
-BTY
Other than the music, unoriginal and boring.
Plot- Simple, guy gets rejected, guy gets angry, guy kills another guy with the help of some cereal box toys that he's pressed into service. In the future, try something more elaborate that needs development to work. Some text would also be nice.
Flash: They need some work. Try practising making sticks hit each other in a small room. Sword fights (with Jedi moves) are also good for finesse. You need to work on cause and affect, like with that blast, L. should have been pushed back, and maybe deflected it onto a legion of angels coming to fight him.
Sound: Excellent, although graphic images and angry music was not enough to interest me whilst Lucy was geting angry. As I said before, text or vivid action is needed.
General thoughts: If you want to seriously improve your flash skills, then focus on creating a fight scene with two or three sticks fighting one stick, not an army v army one. For the plot, maybe write a page or two on the story, and animate that. Anyway, quite good serious attempt, try for longer next time to get 3.5+.