((( DECENT )))
Hmm well it was a good idea, and kinda funny, and it was pretty decent how you made it, i liked the animations, and i liked your backgrounds...
Maybe next time you could add more to the fights, and fix the sound because it was a bit cratchy at times...
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It's was OK
Although I didn't like it very much, I still think it's a good start. Keep trying, you seem to have potential. don't listen to haters.
Oh my god in heaven...
First off, I will admit that I do not review often... But seriously man, What did you expect when submitting this? That people would give a good review? You have to realize that this is absolutely terrible in every way shape and form... I don't even understand the joke... Next tiem, please, oh god please, Do something worthy of this site...
yeah i know people werent going to praise me but saying it was crap and i should nether make flash again seems to me a bit harsh.
everyone has to start somewhere.
that sucked
That was horrible. Not funny at all.
ok.
you seem new to newgrounds so im gonna be kind and type nothin more.
Well, nice try- sort of.
It seems so random. Your trying too hard to be sexual and funny in this thing. try some straight-up comidic peices. I find that these kind of submitors dont try too hard. you seem to know what KIND of comedy you think your audience likes, so stick to it, and dont jump for the easy way out....ie this movie. Ill be watching for your next flash. one more thing- dont speak so closely into your mic. its chinky.
yeah, i said the sound isnt very good.
thanx for the advice.