I like it.
This was pretty good, despite the lack of sync. It's no problem, but if you get a chance, fix it. Either way, you also compressed your file, so good job. Have some pie.
Reviews for "Lj/Habbo"
Squenji responds:
I never did compress it, actually. It was a tiny file as it is, so I just didn't think it was necesary, lol. I did try to resync it when it didn't work on my comp by messing with everything and trying to make it look good, then when I uploaded it, to my horror it was un-sync'd again! Next time I just won't mess with it.
Not bad.
Not a bad submission. Needs a little work, but as you said your not one the nerdy flash guys. So I must give two thumbs... Keep 'em coming.
Just what I was looking for.
Cheesy ass.
((( IT WAS OK )))
Pretty ok for your first submission on NG, but there is some things you should work on like getting the voices, and mouths moving at the same time, and you should add some cool backgrounds, i like the point of the animation, and how you animated this...
Just work on some things, but it was very nice...
~X~
Pretty boring
Well wasn't really an entertaining movie. This was actually pretty boring to watch. I didn't really liked the joke at the end, different sense of humor I guess. I think you should improve a couple of things, even though I doubt you'll ever work on this flash ever again.
Anyway, first of all, I think the graphics need a little improvement. They weren't really that good. Surely I've seen worse, but they are very important so please improve that a bit. Second, you should make it a bit longer. You could add some scene like with that brother asking money and some other stuff like that. I think that would make the movie a lot better. Third, I think it would be nice if you added some music, only at the beginning and at the end would be nice. The voice acting was okay I guess, no need to improve that. I hope you'll improve this stuff, the movie will surely get a higher score then. If you are not going to remake this then I hope you'll remember this for your next flashes.
Anyway overall I'd give this 5 out of 10, 2 out of 5. Like I said, it was a bit boring. I saw that this was one of your first submissions so I guess I shouldn't expect too much. Well I guess you at least putted some effort in this movie, so I should give you some extra points. Practice a bit more with flash I'd say. Good that you had fun making this, keeps you motivated. Anyway, I dunno when your next submission will come out, hopefully it'll be better then this. I wish you good luck with making your next movie or game.
~Auz
Squenji responds:
Well, tanks anyway. ^_^