Oh honey...
You need a hug... Graphics weren't completely wretched, and the style was something different. Not a total waste of time...
Reviews for "Petey The Pigeon"
Invisiduck responds:
yes it was....it was total waste of time, i hated, i only submitted it cus i wanted someone to leave me a really evil review so that i could let out some of the annoyance i am feeling, i probably do need a hug, right after i get absolutley smashed at the local bar.
okay
not bad, but it really could've been longer though.
One rule about jokes is...
...that you don't give away the punch line before you tell it!
I suggest that you remove any comments about "cruelty to pidgeons" from your authors comments box so that the toon is not predictable to any later viewers.
Okay animation, drawings aren't that great. Sound was good for the limited amount of sound you used. Slightly humurous concept.
2/5
Invisiduck responds:
if your gonna be nasty, do it properly not all this animation was ok, drawings arnt that great, come on, you giving me the easy time here, thanks for the 2/5, it didnt even deserve that.....sorry about this i really do have to stop being so damn moody today, thank you for the review.
*scratches head*
WTF? That made nooooooo sense...
Sorry- but it's BLAMATION NATION for this junk.
♥Lia
Invisiduck responds:
your right, now the pigeon shall haunt me forever
(title in work)
^^Good Points^^
Well, the music was kind of cool. A nice calm beat for a city scene.
^^Needs Improving^^
Predictable and boring to say the least. As soon as I heard bus in a story about a pigeon, I knew what was going to happen. Wasn't done well either. Just randomly gets hit by a bus. Needs more storyline to it or something.