(title in work)
^^Good Points^^
Well, the music was kind of cool. A nice calm beat for a city scene.
^^Needs Improving^^
Predictable and boring to say the least. As soon as I heard bus in a story about a pigeon, I knew what was going to happen. Wasn't done well either. Just randomly gets hit by a bus. Needs more storyline to it or something.
okay
not bad, but it really could've been longer though.
good one
i liked it not your greatest work but still damn funny deserves a much higher score
ah well, cant win all the time, i really wanted it blammed now it stuck in my list forever, and will haunt me with its below average score, damn you pigeon, damn you to hell!!!!
nice
To put it simply, i liked the way the pigions head moved before it got hit, very realistic.
i realise there wasnt suppose to be a storyline however i did find it amusing and of higher quality than other things i have seen on here, so considering you werent trying very hard i hope you release something else, i think it would be worth watching
thanks, i would write something longer but i cant be bothered
*scratches head*
WTF? That made nooooooo sense...
Sorry- but it's BLAMATION NATION for this junk.
♥Lia
your right, now the pigeon shall haunt me forever