Hmm.
I dont know why but most peopel hated it I meen:
"You gave this entry a 5, raising its score from 1.6484 to 1.6540!"
Anyways the only thing I didn't like was hte lines over the text, I understand the effect you want but the lines stay in the eyes so the brain can tell that they are still there, which is so fucking annoying and completly destroys the mood.
(Try making the lines different or moving a lines even a little with the text, or both to try and make it more random)
Anyways great job and make sure to get the full movie out sometime this summer, I need some good entertanment.