Umm.
For wipeout those ships flew really high off the ground! I'm not sure if that was the point, that this was a "new" form of high flying wipeout or what, but it was a little wierd. I also, plot-wise (not that there was much of a plot) didn't like that in the beginning the craft crashed for no reason, but then when a hole exploded in its tail, and it headed towards the ground, the orange ship managed to pull up at the last second (in the same random fashion as the red one had earlier). Ok, so work on the whole making sense thing. Next, the graphics were ok, and had potential. I didn't like the weapons, i thought they were rather weak. On the positive side, i thought you did a good job by switching the perspective to the cockpit, although there was another seemingly random crash, but it was a good idea. Yeah, so good luck, work on this one maybe, develop it into something substantial. Peace.