Good piece...
First and formost I would like to say that the music made this piece, it was well chosen and a merit to the story. However it is a sprite animation, this would have been really very good if it was drawn as wen the sprites are zoomed in so much it becomes annoying, also the voice text could have been better chosen and as you have said, the ending was very dissapointing. Overall a good piece though, a nice topic aswell, keep
making flashes such as this and soon you will be able to make pieces scoring 9 and 10 as you have the imagination for it.