Amazing pixel quality and I love the high quality feature you put in there.
Obviously,
H@ckerB0y
Reviews for "Zone-Tan"
The decision to shade so little of her hair and not to shade her shoes at all make those two parts of the picture seem flat. Her right hand (to the viewer's left) has seemingly random lines on it that I don't understand.
With respect to the background, I wonder if the logos would look better staggered, though I could potentially be off about this. In a simple grid, they look a bit repetitive and I wish a little staggering could have been done.
Overall the piece is nice, though the composition is a bit bland (standing straight, looking at viewer, legs apart). The colors mesh together well and the bright eye makes the piece come alive. That you chose pixel art as a medium is another kudos to you, as that's a time-consuming medium to choose.
On the deviantart community you'll find significantly more impressive works, which is the basis of my 3.5/5 (good, above average). Nonetheless, it's nice and well put-together.
This looks really nice. the only thing I can think of that would make this stand out more is if the background was moving. Such as having the logo heads moving diagonal, left to right, vice versa, etc. Would make this very nice and entertaining to look at.
The Zone logos are perfect and don't seem to be in any need of changing at all.
As for Zone herself, I kind of get the feeling the left side (of the image) of her shirt should be down a bit lower. Seems like it would fit a little more having one side down a bit farther than the other.
As for the tentacles, nice to see they have a bit of slime (or cum?) showing that she has her friend ready to play with her or whatever else Zone decides to draw up.
Overall, aside from my thoughts on her shirt. Looks fantastic!
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EventHorizon responds:
Another great review SCTE3!, I thank you for the review and for the advice, are very useful and I'm glad you liked this design! :D
This is awesome! good work,try another one ill sure ill like it ;)
EventHorizon responds:
Thank you! :)
awsome just awsome
EventHorizon responds:
Thank you very much!