Angerman Says:
Hmmmm... not much to say about this one. You shoulda gotten another frame or 2 for DK.. looked prty bad when he was chasing mario... other than that, it was OK. kinda slow at times tho :/
Angerman Says:
Hmmmm... not much to say about this one. You shoulda gotten another frame or 2 for DK.. looked prty bad when he was chasing mario... other than that, it was OK. kinda slow at times tho :/
Its was ok
Speed up the frame rate and have a better plot, thats realy all I got to say
Rather straightforward
This is little more than a typical run of the mill sprite movie - it's well made technically but is lacking in humour and interesting twists, basically everything that makes an average movie good.
Pretty Darn Good
This kept me goin' for a bit.
As the guy before me said, it could've been longer
Perhaps it got such a high rating because you had good frame rates, and everything fit in with each other.
So overall, nice job
Really nice work.
Smooth animation, nice story (could have done with a tiny bit more).
The small file size is also a plus!
The way you included the little parts was great (like the way when mario jumped of the edge, his hat was titled, and the way he skidded [most people would not bother to put those aspects in]).
Nice work.
To improve apon this I would suggest
> A longer story
> Possibly new enemies for next time?
> Possibly various enemies at the same time?
> Include Yoshi!
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I agree, I should've made it longer. This was more of an experiment rather than a cartoon because this is the first time I used sprites (and I just made this over the weekend). So the next one will have more variety in it. Thanks for the positive comments!