what happened?
why did it it just end? Did you get tired or something? Who was the guy in the begining? It has potential but the story needs to be fleshed out a lot.
what happened?
why did it it just end? Did you get tired or something? Who was the guy in the begining? It has potential but the story needs to be fleshed out a lot.
Well...
That was pretty cool. I don't know if you really wanted a plot or not, but I think it needs one. That would actually make a pretty cool trailer, and then you could have an actual movie later? Think about it; it'd be cool.