Needs work this really good drawings, and your a really good artist but this flash needs more to it, i think some music and some animations within the comic would have made it more fun to look at and more entertaining. Maybe add some color next time too, but good job so far but would love to see this one go farthure
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This is a nice comic and it is drawn well. This is some good art, but not a good flash. You need animation to be a flash. Include animation to make this Top Notch.
for the person below me...
Jelle really loves that girl. And i would not blame him if i was him.
cool
y did his penis stick out when the girl walked across him??
to all the people above me...
that movie was pretty funny, but it was more perverted, ; ) keep it up!