ok....
When I saw the title, I thought this was goin to be a great looking flash.. I thought wrong because this movie is a sprite movie... sprite movies are boring. Drawn movies are way better... music was alright though... the text readings weren't even visible...
its ok
the ending is gay
Hhhmmm
Ok next tiem dont use black text for your dialogue. It makes it hard to see especially around dark secenery. Also um too much talk, not enough action.
Practice a bit more
Meh, wasn't really a good sprite movie. I've seen worse though. Anyway it's not really something very original, I see ...VS... movies everyday here on Newgrounds. Anyway, I see it's just your first flash so I shouldn't expect to much. There were a couple of things that could use a little improvement.
First of all, the special effects need some improvement. The blood and the fights didn't really looked that good. Second, probably the most important thing, the text was unreadable at some parts of the movie. I suggest that you either change it in some different color like white or you put the text somewhere at the bottom or at the sides of the screen. At the end, the text went way to fast, I couldn't read anything of it. I hope you'll fix that little thing.
Well I can barely think of any other bad part of this. I'd say it would be better if you learned how to draw, but if your sure that you can't draw anything better then stickman keep on making sprite movies, cause sprite movies are better then most stick movies. I also hope that the storyline will make sense and that it's an original one.
Of course there were also some good parts in this movie. The sounds were pretty good although the sounds for when they walked sounded more like a horse walking. Anyway the music was pretty nice as well. I also liked the different backgrounds, they looked pretty good in my opinion.
So overall I'd give this 4 out of 10, 2 out of 5. Like I said, it wasn't really that good, but I've seen worse. I ain't really that interested in the second episode, but I'll keep an eye out for it anyway to see if you got any better. I think you should practice a bit more with the special effects and I hope part two will be a lot better then this. Anyway good luck with the rest of the series and with any other projects you were going to make in the future.
~Auz
not relly up to spawn standerds
i have seen much worse things , this is not bad but they should talk instad oh text ohhh. and why the HELL IS WOLVEREN IN ITspawn and wolveren are sooooo diferent and spawn would not get hurt by a stupit koopa he would kill him in one hit