recommendations
Excellent work!
I have suggestions:
- Don't zoom so much during the action. Zoom is good, but its hard to see clear when you're too close.
- Smooth out the camera movement. Stuff happens out of the view.
- Slow down. It seems like the flash is in fast-forward. The text goes by too fast sometimes and the action is hard to follow.
Other than that, this kicks ass.
-Ketchup
Could use a little improvement
This was pretty cool. I haven't watched part 1 and 2 yet, I guess I should check them out. Anyway this was a pretty cool movie, I enjoyed watching this. However there were a couple of things that could be a bit better though.
First of all, you should make the text go a bit slower. I couldn't read half of it cause it was already gone then. Second, you should make the camera stand still more often instead of changing the camera-position hundred times. The movie was a bit hard to follow at certain moments. The action also went way to fast, I barely knew what exactly happened. Third, I think it needs a better ending. Currently it looks like you became a bit lazy and wanted to finish the movie as soon as possible. At the end, I could read "Link is your Winner" and the screen was already turning black. You could make some ending scene with Zelda and Link, unless you wanna make a part 4 of course. Fourth, I think you should make the movie a bit longer. You could also make the movie run a bit slower, so it will automaticly become longer. Fifth, not very important, but I'm sure there are some sounds for Link and Mario (you know, those screaming sounds like "whraa","wuhaa" etc.). It would be nice if you added those. Sixth, that army of koopaa's didn't seem to play any role at all, so you might as well remove that part or switch for some other scene.
There were also a couple of good parts in this movie. First of all, the sprites looked pretty good. You normally see those SNES-sprites, but these looked a lot better. Second, the music was pretty good and the sounds were good as well. Since these two things are very important, I'll still give it a pretty high score.
Overall I'd give this 7 out of 10, 3 out of 5. Even though all those things that could use some improvement, I still think it's a pretty cool movie. Like I said, I think I'm going to check part 1 and 2 out. I saw that this might not be the end of the series, I'll keep an eye out for part 4 then I guess. Well keep up the good work and good luck with any other future projects.
~Auz
Its ok but
Abit rushed at the end maybe? I was expecting a "real" fight when bowser decided to bring all those cool soldiers n stuff
Neat Flash
You know what would make this a whole lot better if you went and made a fourth one and then combined them all together in to one that would be way better
What the hell Happened!!!!
the mario vs. link series were good until this one. I couldn't read what anyone said because the text when to fast.(i am hooked on phonics). all of it is good but its needs to be longer and more enjoyable. Like they say " the originals are the best"