I knooow that lead!
Very nice:D Lol i didnt know the original was by you too:P
This one is so much better!
I like it alot, though i think there are some things u could work on:)
- Take that kick.. The kick is really cutted off, i'd rather put that cutoff away and make high band it:D Dont forget the bass though:P What you also could try is to put one cutoff kick, then put a non cutoff kick on top, that'd give it some more bass too:)
- The end was a bit abrupt in my opinion, try ending it with a monotone bass and beat:D
- The lead was nice, though it doesnt sound that original
- The woosh at the beginning is waay to loud, u should try building alot of stuff up till one climax and then add in the lead:) instead of just one w-noise..
-I liked the ambient feel over it alot:D gave me a relaxing feeling:)
Very very nice dude! Though u could improve;)
5/5
9/10
G'day m8s!
Denn-C