Damn Right!
fades in really nicely. Flute patch is cool, I felt that everything should have been brighter and more synthy sounding. It might just be because its midi instrumentation, Im not suree...
If you could find a way to put an effect on your voice and make it lower, it would be 1000x better. Im not saying that what you have is bad, but if you could immitate Issac Hayes voice a little better then it would be perfect.
The outro was cool