Hmmmmmm...
GRAPHICS(4/5) - Again, well drawn. There was more animation in this flash than there was in "The Crazy Guy!!", but not as much as in "The Little Girl". Still the flames were well drawn, but you didn't show her run out of the building or anything like that. More could be done on this.
STYLE(3/5) - Didn't particularly appeal to my taste, and it was kind of short...it also had some plot holes...what exactly caused the school to burn down? Maybe I'm just slow, lol
SOUND(3/5) - It fit the flash, I suppose. I didn't take off due to a lack of sound effects, I just thought you could have found a better sound track. Like, have the music change to something scary or frightening when the building starts burning down.
OVERALL/room for improvement - Add more animation. Make it longer and explain more of what is going on. The flash was kind of confusing. Make the music more interesting. Other than that, nice work. An average flash.
3/5