Very nice!
I loved it! The montage of them in training was really funny, as was the bit where they parachute down into the dirt farming country and start beating all the peasants.
Only thing: THE VOICES! AAARRRRGGHHHH! Especially the drill instructor - his voice drove me nuts!
Nice idea, poorly presented
I liked the idea of the people signing up for the army and stuff and them all getting blown up and stuff but you didnt present it well. I think if you remade this with some one else to help you this could be really good. You should try some1 who can improve those graphics and i think you might want to ask the voice actors to do those voices. Cos by the sounds of things your voice aint broken(mine either - im 13 :P)
I hope you take these things in mind and use them to the best of your potential.
Thanks for listening to my ideas!
shit sound, too long
couldn't finish it bc it was too long and the sound was awful.
Well then...
The sounds was pretty poor, with subtitles this movie would be understood a lot better. It was long atleast, which I liked, but its needs a little more direction, not just some kids being subliminatized (don't know if thats word) into the army and how much george bush sucks. Well it was atleast decent i'll give you that.
Not a total loss
I hate to sound like a prude, but this would have been waaaaay better without voices, they don't fit at all and most of the time I couldn't understand what they were saying. A better script would have been nice too, some of the dialogue was positively juvenile (in delivery and content). On the plus side, there was plenty of animation, and that's good.