Very good.
I think you need to write an intro though...
Reviews for "Heroes March ~P~"
great!
this is better in the game
Amazing stuff, just....
Too short :'(
About the story you wrote.
The story, which is from manga Uber Blatt, is not completed. You might wanna know that those "heroes" who returned home were traitors and killed Lances of Betrayal who were the actual ones to kill the Wishctech.
Nerdy? Yes. However I felt that music did not give me the right feeling considering I read that manga. None the less a really good piece.
Phyrnna responds:
I also read the manga, and I am up to date with it. I just posted the plot synopsis from OneManga.com, even though I well know that there is more to the story than just what the synopsis says.
Nonetheless, the feeling I was going after was just the feeling of the 14 Lances going into battle against the Wischtech.
Cool music!
i wish it was longer :(