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and how did you create this song...
i think the dirty saw/sytnh leads need to be changed. the drums need a little eq and the mix needs to be fixed a little. i would try using a plucked synth with a piano and get some pads and arps on some chords. you do some basic things like that and you could have a pretty good song.
don't take this the wrong way but i ask everyone. did you do this all on computer or did you play any of the instruments.