WHEE!
First off, hooray for FBF doodles. I love FBF doodles, no matter how cliche they may be. As for the senseless violence, eh, its been done but as you said that was old. And you have a unique charm it seems, something that tends to be lost umong the mainstream. Overall, I really really enjoyed this little 'doodle' quite a bit. No music, so I had to give you a bit of a down on that, however, I did enjoy that you focused on the sound effects that made it all more real, rather than adding in a blazing techno soundtrack and ignored any other kind of sound, like so many people tend to do in their hastiness.