pretty cool
a generally fun toon
Reviews for "The RobotWars Episode I"
RicPendragon responds:
thanx
notbad
i like the interactivity with the up arrow the series is looking good
RicPendragon responds:
Wrong episode, the arrow is in Episode V not Episode I. Try to review the right movie.
((( NOTBAD )))
Well notbad, it was cool, still needs somework though, see,s like you put alot of time into this but could still present more detail...
DETAIL: Little things like in the backrounds and effects here and there could make it greatly improved...
Its notbad though, hope to see more soon...
~X~
RicPendragon responds:
hope you enjoy the series
Just a few notes
It was pretty good overall. There were some quirks you should look into revising or considering in future work.
First, spell check. There were a couple typos, which you should work on correcting. The most noticeable one was 'to' instead of 'too.' Just a minor note, detracting from the overal presentation. Everyone makes typos, but on a finished project you should work to iron them out.
Second, the animation was a little sluggish, and choppy. Only a little, but you should work to smooth out the movement paths a touch.
Last, the dialogue was pretty weak. The concept was good, and it would be nice to see more, just consider wording things more forcefully. These are just suggestions.
On a good note, the sprites and music were strong and clean. Overall, good job.
RicPendragon responds:
thanx
nice nice
it was pretty nice
i found the music pretty good
Why did he say ther almost was no music ?
well anyway good job
RicPendragon responds:
thanx i only just started in my spare time