Not the greatest
I hope you come up with something better someday... I also wish people would stop saving crap like this.
Reviews for "A Bullet"
wow...
I don't want to say it's crap, because it wasn't. But it wasn't the best thing on here...
hmm... I guess good job is the best I can say. I liked the poem, but it didn't need the bullet constantly flying past...
good job anyways!
WaGGeR responds:
appreciated
Nice
It realy is a very "speaking" poem.
It had me to the bone...
WaGGeR responds:
Thank you very much! :D
just one issue with the bullet
AHahaha am i the only one who sees the problem with the bullet? Its a bullet and cartridge that he drew that is flying through the air. The firing pin hits the primer in the back of the casing which ignites the powder in the brass cartridge and then at creates pressure that pushes the bullet out of the barrel. And why is the bullet brass colored too? HAha I am sorry its just funny that no one else noticed that problem...The music was cool but you could have made the gun actually firing it...
WaGGeR responds:
yeah .. thanks
Good
It was a pretty good poem turned into a flash, but it would have been better if you had incorporated people or the like...and maybe given it something else, yes?
WaGGeR responds:
than you :D