Could be better
I believe that is from The Gatsby when Gatsby is shot in his pool. The graphics can be better if you practice more
Reviews for "Engrish"
Von-Lark responds:
Have fun with your ten points, I made this today for school on Monday. It was pretty rushed.
KREEPY
but i voted 5 to help ya......i hope it aint blammed
The Great Gatsby
I remember reading it back in high school. He was shot by some guy, who then shot himself or something like that.
Von-Lark responds:
Thank you. 10 points for you.
Interesting style, but the story sucked.
"Butler shoots master in pool." Yawn.
I voted "Nothing too new or interesting," but actually, the way the butler was drawn looked kinda cool, with the shine on his suit and such. If only the animation had told a story that was actually interesting to me in some way, I might have scored this higher.
The formula for a good first flash is 3+ minutes in length NOT due to a long intro or slowly displaying text, consistant art, and a plot that requires at least a short paragraph to explain.
Hopefully, the artist will do something longer in the future. He shows some promise.
Von-Lark responds:
It's just a scean from an English novel.
WTF??????
WTF?????? Theres no story or plot. And why the title Engrish?
Von-Lark responds:
Its a scean from a book