Not bad...
A few more sound effects...
Make your next one a bit longer before submitting it so that there is more to watch next time... Work at it.
Reviews for "RO: Love of a Sprite"
A couple of things
Ok, its good. I gave it protection points and it should last because it is a decent flash. HOWEVER, there are a couple of things that need to be fixed. When the girl is talking to the guy, the text flashes and i barely have time to read what shes saying. Theres NO pausing the text, well cept by milliseconds but thats it.
Cute, clean style
I'd much rather watch sprites like this than those dumb Mario Brothers and other video game ones.
Your movement was very smooth, which, strangely enough, is not always the case with sprite movies. Work a little on making your dialog a little sharper.
Oh, and finish your submissions from now on. Half-baked stuff is pretty annoying. You get a first-time pass this time.
what the?
the text readings aren't very readable... the music is annoying. Imported graphics I see... I guess it's alright... but some voice acting would have been way better. This movie is really short.
hehehe
I usually don't like sprite movies, but this one was very good. The shading of the characters and the backgrounds was just right.
violence 2 for hitting into the wall...