Pretty good.
You touched what I call good music, but I'm afraid I can't give you full marks since this isn't really my type of music. You seem to have put a lot of effort into it and it turned out good so I'll give you 8/10.
If I may suggest, maybe give the vocals a bit more contrast and volume next time? It's not that I can't hear the lyrics or anything but rather that if I analyze the music then the background music seems to revolve around the vocals, so it should be a bit clearer than the background music to give it a center feel. As it is, it seems to 'blend' into the music, and not in the good way, like water blends with alcohol to create something of less value than when we initially started.
Anyways, I'm just nitpicking now. Overall, it's a good song and I look forward to hearing from you guys in the future. Good luck!
Also, I feel like ripping on ComradeJack; If all musicians were meant to be 100% original then there would be as many instruments as there are artists and songs. Good ideas are meant to be copied, otherwise, what's the point of publicizing them? I respect your opinion but I don't feel that I can let this pass as 1/10.