hmm difficult to define
I will gladly say that the quality of animation is excellent, I like that you couldn't see the woman's eyes making it more difficult to interpret her emotions. Whether that was intentional or not it was a nice touch. The actual theme, I won't call it a storyline because that would require a much longer piece; yes I will say it was depressing, but the little visible emotion acted as a buffer. Anywho you get a 4/5, excellent flash and I'm glad you submitted it.
good idea...
...but not a good flash. It has no beginning or end, no good transitions, just big black. It needs work. If you went back and made it longer, maybe showed the two of them together, then it would be more believable and we could sympathize with her. Keep it up.
It was good. good job?
Ok all i need to say is i like it and your flash looks good job.
its good to see now people in NG so if you git a bit of a$$'s it's just sum all the people on NG r a$$'s to the now people and thay thank that if thay make fun of you that thar sum sort of a god will thar not and what thay say is sh1t so be hapy with your flash and hope to see your flashis on NG. PS the people that say make it funny or all 10- and dont now what is good lol your 1 of the week and its not a funny film just now that..
im touched
its amasing i cryed like an hour after i saw it
Well done
I know, everyone sais this, but it really touched me.
It's so sad, you know.
But all the reviews are so sad!
I'll tell you something: this is your first flash movie, right?
Well, it's just perfect!
I couldn't do it better myself.
Keep working on new movies!
Oh yeah, here's a little hint: for your next movie, try to make it a funny one. This one's good, but it's really hard to make a movie that really touches ppl. You may stand a better chance with a funny one. But I love it!