great
lightning? nope... falling tree? nope... killer umbrella!!! nice random ideas keep it up i loved it
Reviews for "SFVS Episode #3"
shampawnya responds:
Thanks man!
sweet
fine work man! -Want to see more
shampawnya responds:
Thanks man!
Alright
Good graphics and animation like before...
1st: Not again! Not funny. Try some irony. Going for the unexpected isn't always going to get a laugh unless it's ironic (like the croc/meteor in the last one).
2nd: Ha! Funny. Although, it didn't really look like the assumed danger was really going to kill him. It was just funny because the way he died was funny.
3rd: Meh. Bloody, certainly. But not funny.
2/5 (but it's a high 2!)
shampawnya responds:
Thanks for the review!
Right on. Glad you listened to suggestions
That's looking much better, Listening to your commentary, there were a few things that were unclear that you intended. Such as I wasn't really thinking there was a lightning storm, might want to try to allude more to that. The tree was a bit too far in the background so when it was wobbling, I didn't really think it was going to fall on him either. Although, the unbrella destroying his cranium is a great touch. That made me snicker. All in all, fairly well made. good job.
shampawnya responds:
Thanks for the review!
hahaha...not bad :D
great work!! keep up more hilarious!! 4/5 for you!!
shampawnya responds:
Thanks for the review!