not bad
good sotry but make it longer and use better details!!!!
Reviews for "A Conspiracy"
nice!
I like the fact that you used voice and not some text, animation wasnt bad...a lot better than i could do. I see promice.
Not great
Everything was kind of mediocre, animation was nothing special, storyline was kind of boring and sound pretty average too. Not terrible but not great either.
Meh.
Just a few minor complaints.
The sound wasn't very good. You could hear the crackle of a computer microphone whenever someone spoke. And the script needs polishing-
"Were there any survivors?"
"We found three survivors."
It's extremely repetitive, and means someone needs to re-read the script and take out the extra words, and smooth it up a bit. Other than that, it's not bad- though I do hope you *have* gotten better with your flash, as you say you have.
.
A full episode of something with that quality of work should be able to be finished in like 1 day with that many people working on it. I would probably put off doing a full release of this for now and have you guys concentrate more on practice.
NullZilla responds:
this is just small preview and we made this movie 2 year ago now our flash skill are super and we remake movie entire again but full too