Cooly o
Exccellent graphics needs to be longer next time
Reviews for "SFVS Episode #2"
shampawnya responds:
Thanks.
Nice
Nice work. Various splatsounds would be nice, though.
shampawnya responds:
Yes... there will be various "blood" noises in the next, I kinda rushed to get this done in 2 days. Thanks for the review.
If your humour rivalled your art...
Your artwork is really good, very nice style and the animation is sound too. The sound effects were so-so, got the message across.
The humour however was sorely lacking, the whole "Windows is error prone rargh I'm so angry I'm sure some random violence will ensue" thing is a bit overdone, and the sound-effects for it are so common that they are a bit annoying unfortunately, though that's really Windows' fault not yours.
The second one was a bit predictable, since you can clearly see what's going to happen, if it had just randomly happened it would be more interesting.
The third was the best, but still not executed that well, the lack of sound led to it feeling "slow" so it lost it's effect.
I look forward to seeing more movies featuring your artwork, but the humour needs some work. Try throwing random violence ideas at a few friends and see what the resultant ideas are, you usually get something interesting that way!
shampawnya responds:
Yeah I seem to get the notion that my humor aint soooo hot... but I laugh. Thanks for the indepth review... they're nice to see and too far in between. Thanks man!
Bah
This is not even funny killing/dying.
make something with more quality plz. With ur skills you could do better!
shampawnya responds:
You're just jealous, but thanks for the review.
Alright I suppose
Overall, okay drawings and animation. By scenes...
Scene 1: Uninspired, boring.
Scene 2: Ripped from Monty Python! (Holy Grail)
Scene 3: This is what the other two should've been like! Funny.
2/5
shampawnya responds:
I know... the next one will be more unpredictable. Thanks for the review.